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Post by nick on Dec 15, 2011 12:31:23 GMT -5
No offense but that just doesn't fit the character. It's like having a rapper wear a leather jacket and sport a mohawk
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Post by Memai on Dec 15, 2011 19:41:16 GMT -5
Oh c'mon Nick. Rapper with mohawk (Lil Twist) Oh look, another one (Hoddy) Cornrows AND a mohawk!Bonus, leather jacket! (made popular by Jay-Z) You agreed to letting Professor write about what he looks like and what not, if you don't agree to her suggestions, the least you could do is tell her WHY you disagree and provide examples of what you were thinking of, because clearly it looks like you've already built up this character in your head from the beginning :\ Professor has already agreed to some of the changes you made from her original, earlier suggestions, the least you could do is freakin' agree on a hairstyle 9___9
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Post by professorpineapple on Dec 15, 2011 20:39:04 GMT -5
Don't be so stereotypical, Nick. The hair stays. If this boy is really as "tough" as you want him to be, he wouldn't care whether he looked the part of a "gangster" or not.
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Post by UnknownTerritory on Dec 15, 2011 20:50:48 GMT -5
I think the hair is fine. It's just hair, really.
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Post by nick on Dec 16, 2011 7:25:46 GMT -5
Alright. But I want a drawing of the guy. You hear, Mems? And professor, I need to put up the whole profile so you need to edit the things you said you were going to.
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Post by professorpineapple on Dec 16, 2011 13:10:01 GMT -5
Done and done.
If Mems is busy with IRL, I can draw him. My winter break starts at 4:30 today, so I'll have the time.
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Post by nick on Dec 16, 2011 14:32:58 GMT -5
Full Name: Cesar Luis Castillo Herrera (simply Cesar Herrera)
Nickname: None
Age: 15
Birthday: May 13
Sex: Male
Gender: Male
Height: 5 foot 7
Weight: 142 pounds
Race: Hispanic (Puerto Rican)
Language: English (with a slight Hispanic accent), Spanish
Skin tone: Brown
Eye Color: Dark brown
Hair Style: Curly, chin-length hair
Hair Color: Black
Facial Features: Noticeably large nose, prominent cheekbones, deep-set eyes
Defining Features: Pale scar on his chin
Body Shape: Somewhat stocky – hard muscles under soft pudge.
Outfits:
Summer Uniform: Dark green school sweater with brown leather patches on the elbows. White collared shirt, tan slacks, black sneakers. S. Casual: White basketball jersey with ripped jeans and black sneakers. Winter Uniform: Dark green Bullworth zipped jacket, teal beanie, brown scarf, black pants and boots. W. Casual: Same as uniform, with dark blue snow jacket.
Personality Info
Mannerisms: He suffers from Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder (ADHD) so he never sits peacefully; either he'll tap his fingers on the table, his foot, pencil, etc.
General traits: Quiet, cool and collected, but is prone to outbursts of hyperactivity. He finds it difficult to focus and concentrate. He's generally indifferent to the world around him. Is a good liar, and won't hesitate to steal something if he needs it. He is stubborn and can sometimes be hypocritical.
Most Pronounced Trait: He incorporates some spanish words in his English, especially when calling people and insulting them. His catchphrase is "cabron". Hidden Trait: He loves insects. Worst Trait: Stubborness and sometimes hypocrisy
Goals: He's pretty indifferent and apathic and has never really thought about it.
Fears: Nothing in particular.
Hobbies: Enjoys playing dominoes and basketball. He likes chess, but doesn't play it often and isn't good at it.
Beliefs: He doesn't believe in God.
Passions: Nothing in particular.
Rate out of 10:
Endurance: 7
Has a good chin, and is a good runner.
Strength: 8
He is a gifted fighter, although doesn't have a lot of raw power.
Intelligence(Left): 4
Due to a lot of skipping school while living in his hometown, he doesn't have much education knowledge.
Intelligence(Right): 7
He isn't a genius, but is intelligent a bit over average. He also has a lot of street smarts.
Honesty: 4
He won't hesitate to lie to get himself out of trouble. He doesn't hesitate to steal either, but isn't a kleptomaniac. Due to his shoplifting skills he will rarely pay for everything he takes in a store.
Compassion: 3
He's pretty indifferent and doesn't really care for anything that doesn't affect him or those he takes a liking to.
Beauty: 5
Aside from maintaining personal hygiene, he doesn't really put too much effort in making himself look pretty.
Social Status
Clique: Non-Clique Student
Friends: None from Bullworth yet.
Crush: None yet
Enemies: None yet
Outlook on Life: None really.
Short Bio:
Cesar Luis Castillo Herrera was born in Bohan, Liberty City to Miguel Castillo Lopez and Maria Herrera Solano, two Puerto Rican people who emigrated into the US. Cesar's father was a taxi driver, and he was a pretty harsh man who, while not being one of those alcoholics who abused their families, still beat Cesar a lot. Growing up in Bohan was hard, but it toughened Cesar up. As a teenager he would skip school with his friends, he would hang with them, doing things like smoking cigarettes and weed, he would shoplift, getting mostly hip hop music from record stores. He would also get in fights frequently, and create problems for his parents. Eventually, he was arrested after beating up some kid, and was put to trial. At the end he managed to walk free, but unfortunately for him, his father had heard of Bullworth Academy, an independent boarding school located in a town of Bullworth, New England. He had also heard of the school's tough reputation, and decided to send his son to teach him to behave himself.
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Post by UnknownTerritory on Dec 16, 2011 18:00:19 GMT -5
Cesar or César? I looked it up and it seems César is the more Hispanic form.
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Post by nick on Dec 16, 2011 18:22:06 GMT -5
Yeah but I don't have it on my keyboard and I cba to copy-paste all the time.
Now, I really like the clothes he wears but I think that he shouldn't have just one casual outfit. People change clothes and only cartoon characters wear one thing all the time. I think that he should have a fashion style rather than outfit. I suggest some street hip hop style (hoodies, jeans, track pants, sneakers, etc.)
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Post by Memai on Dec 16, 2011 18:35:57 GMT -5
Eh, I don't really have time to draw the guy ;____; (I wish I could, but I can't). I'll let prof handle the drawing aspect, since she's more involved and what not :> I normally come up with portraits for the line up of our OCs though, so I might squeeze this guy in there if/when I have the time ;____;
(but you kidlets go on and have your fun asdjkl)
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Post by professorpineapple on Dec 16, 2011 19:17:49 GMT -5
IRL people change clothes, yet, but Cesar is a Bully character - he's lucky to even get casual clothes
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Post by Memai on Dec 17, 2011 4:03:36 GMT -5
^ Agreed XD You're not really going to see him out of his school uniform anyway I don't think any one of us here has written about our own respective characters' wearing anything casual :x
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Post by UnknownTerritory on Dec 17, 2011 11:31:28 GMT -5
Tony took off his jacket in one rp.... but he was still wearing his vest xD No t-shirt.
You could add more casual just for fun, but you won't really be describing their clothes much and they won't be out of their uniform a lot, if at all.
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Post by nick on Dec 18, 2011 13:19:17 GMT -5
I started up the story in Roleplay section. Hopefully we will get a separate location just for stories like this and then it will get moved.
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Post by professorpineapple on Dec 18, 2011 16:47:35 GMT -5
Wait, did we have an actual storyline in mind yet? For this kind of story, we should have at least some idea of where we're going - it's different from a traditional RP since we're all playing the same guy.
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