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Post by AshHavynn on Mar 19, 2008 23:21:59 GMT -5
Ladeeda, Ash posts again. You can forget me uploading all of those images from the last forum, though. But here's a teaser for the upcoming Spring/Summer RWW line. Loretta, the Housemaid, in her typical flowing cloths.
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Post by AshHavynn on Mar 19, 2008 23:23:55 GMT -5
You should be beginning to realize just how obnoxious some RWW prints can be. Loretta just happens to be one of the braver souls when it comes to modeling.
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Post by Memai on Mar 20, 2008 3:08:04 GMT -5
I'd wear those leggings, seriously >_> I wants me some RWW to go with mah Aquaberry * 3* It's looking mucho awesome, can't wait to see the rest, girlie >w<
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Post by Chelsea Saughton on Mar 20, 2008 11:50:54 GMT -5
O-o RWW designs are fucking bold, seriously!
How did you do this, Ash? Photoshop? It's looking well good. Sexy, skinny legs!
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Post by AshHavynn on Mar 21, 2008 15:46:57 GMT -5
Yeah, Photoshop stamp pattern tool. It's like painting, only instead of colors you use a pattern.
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Post by DJKID on Mar 21, 2008 19:58:59 GMT -5
Why does it seem that your drawing skill suddenly jumped out of the water is amazingly whoa good? You know I already thought it was good, but whoa.
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Post by AshHavynn on Apr 1, 2008 0:49:44 GMT -5
Yeah so it's midnight here and I'm wide awake after playing FFVII: Crisis Core (my bro's X-box controller battery died D=<) and I'm in a real Seraph-y emo misunderstood +WHOA!EXPLOSION SCENE mood.
And I feel bad for wanting to post a new RP idea like...
every day. So I'll blab. Course if we ever need 100 different RP story archs, I'm the chick to let attack the boards.
YAY FOR USING IMPROPER ENGLISH TO SYMBOLIZE INSTABILITY!! Didn't pay much attention to what I just wrote. Probably better that way.
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Post by AshHavynn on Apr 1, 2008 0:58:50 GMT -5
In case you can't tell It's supposed to be near impossible to read at parts. Though this EXACT situation wouldn't happen in Bully world (its moreso an FF VII Seraph thing), there's still countless things you can get on the relationship between these 2 divas here.
OH YEAH. In the parts where insanity is verging, or quite clear, it would probably help if you go ahead and assume that any opinion or statement Seraph or her narrarator makes is a lie minus the action scenes. Hence the "Prettiest Girl in the World" bit.
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Post by Chelsea Saughton on Apr 2, 2008 10:49:01 GMT -5
You know, up till i read this, i really thought Seraph was a sane girl. But not now. I loved the use of spelling and punctuation (or lack there of) to show how she was loosing her grip on reality near the end- and how the spaced out words show her plummeting back down to earth and getting the fuck out of there.
"a thousand times encore," kind of meant to me that life is a stage, and Seraph is kind of taking her 'bows' if you like a million times over for an ACT. I dunno if that's what you intended, but i felt that.
The capital latters too seemed to indicate her struggling effort to keep her thoughts straight and think of what she's got to loose (e.G her captainship).
(Sorry i couldn't be more analytical, but i've been analysing Educating Rita to death this week. >.> I'm all anylsed out)
I really enjoyed this piece, i like exploring Seraph's and REL's relatioship because we know so little about it other than that they WERE friends.
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Post by AshHavynn on Apr 2, 2008 21:59:54 GMT -5
I'm glad you liked the effects. I was hoping they'd make it feel more struggling and whacko, but I wasn't entirely sure. I'll probably use that same writing style later on in my fanfic featuring Seraph, because it's really more fitting. That and it's mainly told in 1st person--so her thinking of herself like a narrarator or conscience would be freaky cool.
I never thought of that line that way before.
againandagainandagain A thousand times encore
Really, it was supposed to read like it wasn't the first time she'd lost her grip, hurt someone, hurt /REL/. And it wouldn't be the last. This is significant because she's had to work SO hard to stay on the drill team/become captain/not get expelled. She's one of those "I'm so bad I've been expelled from anywhere half decent" kids, as Gary puts it.
Really, I'd love for our OCs and more beloved canons to sneak into BCA. BC is not for normally functioning people, though the students just DO NOT KNOW THAT. If they'd paid more attention to the way their boys are handled over at Gentleman's 9th, Will's school, they'd know better.
But that's an interesting take (I think I'll do an insano story for REL some time using that line in that context, it's a VERY REL mindset.)
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Post by fireinthedisco on Apr 2, 2008 22:49:24 GMT -5
tl; dr.... jkjk
Hah, it gets pretty insane towards the end. I like I like. The feeling it give the reader.. with the chills down the spine and stuff. And the Alice in Chains harhar. Good job! Sorry, i'm not an analyzer.. My brain can't do stuff like that. Cool beans; nice to know Seraph a bit more. And yeah, I agree with Joshy, I thought seraph was totally sane before this..
and I t h i n k t h i s l o o k s v e r y c o o l.
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Post by AshHavynn on Apr 4, 2008 22:30:38 GMT -5
Thanks, Sam! Glad you liked the style. I'm really starting to want to write a short fanfiction called "Prettiest Girl In The World" now, but I'd need to introduce the OCs first before just diving into their psyches.
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Post by DJKID on Apr 14, 2008 15:50:03 GMT -5
I read this forever ago and never said anything for some reason...
Either way I REALLY FREAKING LIKE IT.
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Post by AshHavynn on Apr 14, 2008 21:56:50 GMT -5
yay.
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Post by AshHavynn on Sept 8, 2008 17:32:01 GMT -5
...No, it's way fuckin' old. But it's a remake of that old comic I did. Original comic:
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